I agree with ... This is not a full sequel. The anticipation of what kept Toby from getting in the bus is litteraly going to kill me! I dont care how long it's been since you've written for this fantastic story but you need to continue it. Please?

Sigh. Love it and wish there was more. looking forward to it anyway.

DUDE! WHERE IS THE SEQUE! 561 words is a great start to your tale but REALLY? There is written proof of your promise is of a sequel and its what 2012 come on. Your talents in the fantastic tale are really spectacular. Continuing this would be wise, besides how would Jareth feel? ( yes feel guilty this is the best story line plot thing that I have encountered) Use your skill and please please PLEASE with a Goblin King on top finish. Thanks you kind author for your time.
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I am so hoping that I see an alert for this soon. I've literally just sped my way through the prequel to this and I can't wait for more of it. I love the way that you wove the story, the characters. Wonderful.

I wonder just where this will go?

KYAA! I can hardly wait for the next chappy!

Oooooh, I like this one and I can't wait for more chapters! When will the next one be up?

Waiting (im)patiently,

Sylver

This adult Toby is so intriguing. Quite a change from the usual mischievous little boy you read about in the majority of the fan fics.

I'm so glad you're continuing the story. I can't wait to find out what happens. As always, your beginnings are a fantastic lure.

Creepy, I'm loving it! I have been so looking forward to this.

Yeah! The sequel is here! I like the start that Toby is finally taking things seriously.

YAY! A sequel :-). I can't wait to see where this goes! And it's already starting off with questions, I love it! _

Update soon!

Fairfarrne,

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