|Reviews for Hide and Seek|
| burnouts 3/20/11 . chapter 1
Oh my god, I got chills reading this one.
Tons of words come to mind when reading this.
Beautful. Wonderful. Epically-Amazing. Just to name a few :)
Even better job since this is your first freeverse :D
I LOVED it!
| revolution rae 3/18/11 . chapter 1
sad; well-written. i like it.
| in sync 1/25/11 . chapter 3
I thought that this was an interesting thing to do with this couple, because, yeah, they'll argue (What couple doesn't?) but I don't really see Scorpius ever getting this angry.
But this was very good! Hope to see another one posted soon!
| in sync 1/25/11 . chapter 2
Oh, I liked this one!
I liked how it was in Ron's point of view about Rose and Scorpius' relationship. I especially liked that he didn't resent Scorpius because he made Rose happy.
| Rue-the-Marauder 1/12/11 . chapter 3
Hm, I like this! I can't be because of the fact that I love Scorpius, and masquerade has to be one of my favorite words ever...
| DangerouslyAvril 12/28/10 . chapter 3
I really liked this. It was refreshing and definitely something new. Great work. (:
| Jane Willow 12/26/10 . chapter 1
I love the beginning, talking about hiding him under stairs. And the end is really powerful, too. "He can't have you because you are mine." Very sweet!
| Littlemissdarling 12/11/10 . chapter 1
I've just discovered freeverse and this was so good. Most of the other I've read have come across as quite immature, this wasn't at all.
| in sync 12/6/10 . chapter 1
This is amazingly well-written for your first freeverse.
I really liked how you described Lily's reactions towards the event happening, and I really liked how she wanted to hide Harry from Voldemort.
The last verse was just a perfect way to end the story.
| beedivine 12/5/10 . chapter 1
For your first ever freeverse I thought that it was pretty good! I love how you made Lily's thought come across as being very frantic - that made it so much more realistic and believable. I really loved the lines:
"He wants you
He'll never have you
Really nice job!
| Acciopencil 12/5/10 . chapter 1
This was your first free verse? WOW. WOW. WOW.
I'm a fan of poetry, but you just made love free verse as well!
Some free verses can be hard to read, but I like how yours didn't concentrate on bolding and spacing - but it focused on the words, which were absolutely stunning!
You said it wasn't going to be sad, but I almost cried as well! xD I felt the panic of Harry's mother, and her desperate attempts to save her Harry. :)
Just...stunning job! I'll look out for more! :)
| Wragziez 12/5/10 . chapter 1
I've never liked poetry or stuff like this but this was beautiful!
| Calliope and Puck 12/5/10 . chapter 1
Sorry I don't feel like logging in right now. Normally, I truly detest most poetry authors post here, as it is filled with angst and bad rhymes. I rather liked yours however. Hopefully I don't sound moronic when I say it flowed. I'm not sure if you realize this or not, but you wrote your verse in the style of e. , who is and always will be, my favorite poet. Awaiting more! -C