Oh my god, I got chills reading this one.

Tons of words come to mind when reading this.

Beautful. Wonderful. Epically-Amazing. Just to name a few :)

Great job.

Even better job since this is your first freeverse :D

I LOVED it!

sad; well-written. i like it.

I thought that this was an interesting thing to do with this couple, because, yeah, they'll argue (What couple doesn't?) but I don't really see Scorpius ever getting this angry.

But this was very good! Hope to see another one posted soon!

Oh, I liked this one!

I liked how it was in Ron's point of view about Rose and Scorpius' relationship. I especially liked that he didn't resent Scorpius because he made Rose happy.

Hm, I like this! I can't be because of the fact that I love Scorpius, and masquerade has to be one of my favorite words ever...

I really liked this. It was refreshing and definitely something new. Great work. (:

I love the beginning, talking about hiding him under stairs. And the end is really powerful, too. "He can't have you because you are mine." Very sweet!

I've just discovered freeverse and this was so good. Most of the other I've read have come across as quite immature, this wasn't at all.

This is amazingly well-written for your first freeverse.

I really liked how you described Lily's reactions towards the event happening, and I really liked how she wanted to hide Harry from Voldemort.

The last verse was just a perfect way to end the story.

For your first ever freeverse I thought that it was pretty good! I love how you made Lily's thought come across as being very frantic - that made it so much more realistic and believable. I really loved the lines:

"He wants you

(but)

He'll never have you

Because,

You'r e."

Really nice job!

This was your first free verse? WOW. WOW. WOW.

I'm shocked.

I'm a fan of poetry, but you just made love free verse as well!

Some free verses can be hard to read, but I like how yours didn't concentrate on bolding and spacing - but it focused on the words, which were absolutely stunning!

You said it wasn't going to be sad, but I almost cried as well! xD I felt the panic of Harry's mother, and her desperate attempts to save her Harry. :)

Just...stunning job! I'll look out for more! :)

I've never liked poetry or stuff like this but this was beautiful!

Sorry I don't feel like logging in right now. Normally, I truly detest most poetry authors post here, as it is filled with angst and bad rhymes. I rather liked yours however. Hopefully I don't sound moronic when I say it flowed. I'm not sure if you realize this or not, but you wrote your verse in the style of e. , who is and always will be, my favorite poet. Awaiting more! -C