Uwaaah! I love it! More please! I love how for once somebody portrays Cloud in a way that befits his appearance instead of what we already know about him. It's really nicely put together! And I can't wait for the confrontation between Cloud and Sephy after reading what you just wrote! I especially loved the bit about the kicked puppy and what Seph thought about it! I was almost in tears at how funny I thought that part was...but then again, it is 4am over here...and i should be asleep...so that may be why I laughed so hard...but oh well, please update soon! I wanna know what happens next!

lololol. so you leave a comment, i'll leave a review XDDDD

threesome, hmm? lolol. and the thing in the lecture hall, sounds like that could actually happen. did it? /cackles

lolol. jealous gazes, girls, jealous gazes. Yes, the bemoan of the lady. Why are all hot men gay? /sighs

Sorry, I'm not making much sense

Sounds like an interesting start so far, although Sephiroth's speech reminds me eerily of the real world.

Keep up writing, would you?

mmmm hmmmm, had something to each other huh... hmmmm, I'D LOVE THAT!

Love the start. Hope to see more.

Hmm...I think it's really interesting so far. :) I want to see why Sephiroth likes Cloud, but was actually very intimidating to him when he saw him. :P Well, anyway, continue on! It was really very good so far. :)