A great story !

great story. I love Grace and uncle Steve

Love this story! HAve you thought about writing another fic for Hawaii Five 0? I love the way you write hurt Danny.

I started reading this on LJ, and I was instantly hooked. So, naturally, I lost it. Imagine my delight when I found it, here, and finished, to boot.

I loved this story. The emotion between Steve and Danny, the bond that goes so deep, so far beyond mere love. And, the devotion Danny has for his daughter, some of which rubbed off on Steve. This is incredible.

I've already reviewed this story once, but I had to again. Over 600 stories in this fandom, and this is STILL the best one, IMO. This is just excellence. It sucked me in even after reading it a few times. And you nailed all the characters. Love it. Love it. Thank you for this story.

I enjoyed your story, thanks for sharing it. But I really thought they should go for the complications of a relationship.

just to let you know, I'm here! I'm reading and enjoying it very much. Thank you for sharing your writing.

Wow...this was freakin' hilarious - big smiles. Great story. Loved it! :)

Oh my gawd - I love this!

Favorite lines:

"You emotional cripple! Talking about anything with you is like teaching math to a German Shepherd!"

"I'm going to get some of those face cards with the different emotions and we'll practice different expressions and the words that go along with them. It'll be fun. I can yell out words like 'contemplative' and you can show me that face."

"I mean, if you could grow a pair of nice, soft, squishy boobs, you'd be irresistible to me."

I just love everything about this deeply emotional, angsty story. Great job!

I loved the premise of this story and the way Steve approached solving Danny's problem as a mission. It was well in character for both of them and I loved the scenes with Rachel and her mother. Thank you for writing this.

What a Wild and Crazy story this was! I enjoyed all the ups, downs, twists, and turns that came with this ride! Loved the h/c, whumping and snarking!

Please don't make us wait too long for your next story!

You. Tease. *huffs*

Great story though. I'm just rewriting the ending in my head 's all. o Great characterizations and love the plot.

Thanks for the read and sharing your talent. Looking forward to more of your stories.

I'm really enjoying the story! I hope you keep writing h 5-0, you've got a talent!

Very good story; the ending ruined it. I do hope you write more H50, because

you're a super story-teller.