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Princessdeirdre 3/12/04 . chapter 1
Im not a fan of poetry but i like this very much Tango:)
L 0 K I 3/12/02 . chapter 1
i especially like the last two lines: "You're thinking of me not as this or that/But everything at once, and love me for it."

just right. subtle and beautiful. good rhythm throughout. i keep pouring over the last lines...i like them very much.
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