yay! SUPER KAWAII! So cute hehe keep writing!

That was fun. Good work.

I LURVE this...it's so darn sweet, and great story telling. It'd be nice, though, that you put a list of what all the japanese words mean, rather than me searching them up on a translator.

That was most interesting and pretty darn good. Very sweet.

*claps and whistles* how sweet! Don't think I've ever seen this pairing here. Wonderful writing, I look forward to your next posting _