Damn Hibari for scaring Suzume like that. :(

I read the two one-shots and I absolutely had to read this! I love it! Update soon!

You are good! Keep writing!

I cant wait!

i'm just going to review so I can favorite this story

For some reason I feel depressed after reading this. It was an amazing chapter and very emotional for me. But I feel sad because I get why Hibari and Kusakabe are acting weird around her and that makes me sad... Always your writing is simple, but conveys so much and I really love that. I can't wait to see what will happen next with this story.

thank you for the new chapter!

I replied to your email ealier about Kusakabe, this one didn't have any of those error so it was good.

Suzume is close to Hibari so Kusakabe using Kyo-san in front of Suzume is an exception, so don't need to worry about that after you read my email.

I like how Hibari is being nice secretly to Suzume!

I see you posted the new chapter up! :)

Alkjsdg I just reread it and I'm seeing all the tiny details that I missed D: Why do I do this...

Anyways! Good chapter. It really conveys her frustration clearly; and I'm definitely interested in seeing what will happen in the next chapter.

Keep writing

Finely, she figures it out! o

I was wondering why she hadn't already.

So I'm guessing the Future Arc is starting then? I'm interested to see what is going to happen between the future Hibari and Suzume. :) or her reaction when the younger Hibari is sent there.

Can't wait for the next chapter! w

thank you for the new chapter!

I wonder what will happen to Suzume because now she is here with Tsuna and everyone else.

I think Chrome and Suzume will get along with eachother, like how they were never really contacted with the love everyone gives out normally. Well, Suzume is already getting used to everyone than Chrome because they were in the same school. But I think Suzume will understand how Chrome feels about.

Maybe you can make a chapter about this.

An update! Wao. XD I like this chapter even though there is little interaction between suzume and hibari. :3 merry Xmas! 8D

Pretty good chapter. Kind of short but at least she finally knows the truth. Wonder what'll happen next!

Am beginning to like the spinoff. :3

Plus, am curious of the disease Suzume has. xD

Please update soon!

Another review from me

I'm loving how you took the two one shots and added a fiction to it!

Keep continuing!

Yay, for updates! I can't believe she's in the future again. I wonder what Suzume saw on Hibari and Kusakabe's face. I'm pretty sure it's Hibari at the end who picks up Suzume,even so I hope she will be okay.

I'll wait patiently for the next chapter to come out, to see.X)

oh wow! i love this story! XD please update as soon as possible! :)