|Reviews for Pride of the Fallen|
| Ha'niqua 4/11/12 . chapter 1
Obviously it was Ginny. u_u
I liked this. It wasn't really what I was expecting - but then again I didn't bother reading the description, so there you go - but I like what you did with it. I guess it's kind of something obvious, that Draco mightn't be good at flying at all, but definitely something I don't think of when it comes to canon which is why I enjoyed it, as short as it is.
| Boogum 3/25/11 . chapter 1
Thoughts? I would like this to be longer.
Drabbles are such teases, and this one was no exception. It's short, but I still get a strange sense of Draco and Ginny's character (yes, I read this as Ginny). I would love to see what happens when these two actually talk. Sparks of all kinds are sure to fly.
That being said, romance aside, I think you did very well showing Draco's pride in 100 words. No easy feat.
| Gitana del Sol 2/22/11 . chapter 1
lol! loved this! but its definitely NOT Ginny - Draco would not let himself stoop that low. the whole Malfoy/Weasley thing does not happen until the third generation (third because as i write for the Marauder generation I consider them first generation) with Scorpius and Rose :]
| xoxLewrahxox 12/15/10 . chapter 1
Love the Malfoy arrogance that you presented here.. You show him to be a typical Malfoy in the first line or so, with just the hope that nobody has seen him. Then you see him sort of losing his confidence when he sees Ginny sniggering. (That is typical Ginny by the way- great the way you portrayed her.)
I have to say though, I do like the fact that Marcus Flint mumbled something under his breath because it shows the fact that Draco can't really rely on his Malfoy name wih the Older years because they don't really care, though after saying that Marcus mumbled it which could suggest: he daren't say it allowed. (?) I dunno, ignore my train of thought here Liz..
Though I do like the typical arrogance coming back at the end with the sneering.
Fantastic work! :D
| Estella May 12/12/10 . chapter 1
I liked this drabble and thought it was pretty effective.
Still, I think your sentence structure could've used some cleaning up. There were a few sentences here (like the first, fifth, and sixth) that worded a bit awkwardly and jolted me out of the flow of reading.
| BellaPur 12/10/10 . chapter 1
Gah! Ginny! And snickering at my dearest Draco, the bitch!
Notwithstanding, you're a good author so naturally that was good.
| SKINNYxLOVE 12/10/10 . chapter 1
I like it. ] I'm not quite who the girl was, though (to myself.) To me, it's not Ginny. Because Draco was distracted by her and I don't ship Ginny/Draco. So, hmm... well, I guess it's just some pretty girl. (And we all know Ginny isn't pretty. P )
But, anyway. I liked the ending, how Draco tries to save face almost. But, no matter what, his pride would be hurt. Good job. ]
| Lamia of the Dark 12/8/10 . chapter 1
| Inkfire 12/7/10 . chapter 1
Ooooh, Ginny! Interesting ;)
I liked this. My fave parts were Flint's mumbling, and especially Draco's spitting grass. That was PRICELESS ;)
| Free Dreamer Night Writer 12/7/10 . chapter 1
I'm taking the girl to be either Astoria or Hermione. Not Luna, because she's too dreamy, Ginny would probably insulted him in some way and Pansy would have done the whole "Oh Draco, are you alright" thing.
I like how you make Draco so prideful even when spitting grass.
| Lady Eleanor Boleyn 12/6/10 . chapter 1
Ooh! I like this! It's a very good insight into Draco's character and how he's brought up to be a Malfoy - almost with inborn pride.
I shall take the girl to either be Ginny or Astoria Greengrass - his later wife.
| Expecting Rain 12/5/10 . chapter 1
Oooh, I like this one a lot! Double meaning of "fallen," and Draco acting like a proper Malfoy, even while spitting grass!
| PieceOfGum 12/5/10 . chapter 1
That sounds very Ginny indeed! Definitely not Pansy, though. She's too clingy. Perhaps... Luna! xD