This story was good and I enjoyed it, but it would have been better if you added more of the Midsummer Night's Dream characters in the script reacting with the Lord of the Ring characters. It was more like they just taged along and not really said anything that much to the other characters. It mostly only had the Lord of the Ring characters reacting with each other and it made it a little boring to read. No offence. But it made it seems that I'm mostly just reading the script from the Lord of the Rings movie with additional characters added to it, but they weren't really being used much in the story. It would have been better if you took the script and added a lot more of your own script to it and less of the movies, but still have some from the movie's in it as well, because of some of the events that take place. You know make it your own and not just copy everything completely from the movie. Nobody likes to read over something they already seen. It's too predictable. But I did enjoy reading the Midsummer characters meeting the Lord of the Ring characters and also that Demetrius finally realized his love for Helena. I say good job on coming up with the story. It was a great idea. :D