| Reviews for Divine Punishment |
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Lady Isludis 5/15/13 . chapter 23Well we all knew this was coming, I'm just surprised at how well you've tackled the um... subject matter xD I suppose this means that changes are coming for the other girls as well. I'm just a little sad that they're starting to grow up already, but I can't wait to find out what kinds of adventures they get into next :D |
Shadowpelt2 5/11/13 . chapter 10Oh my goodness! I always HATED getting spanked! And you captured the feeling so realisticly it brought back memories! I almost forgot the feeling after getting spanked! XD And in all that I thank you for bringing back my childhood 3! :D I LOVE THE FEELING OF BEING A CHILD AGAIN!(I almost said kid... kids are baby goats ;D) |
cybermage99 5/1/13 . chapter 23i would love a deleted scenes story it would be awesome also my old name was just before i had ann account im cybermage99 now don't waste your time on writung it twice i like your story and this was a chaptee i think we all knew was coming i just want to see what happens when zelda tries to explain it to nayru or if she gets some gaurds to do so for her cuase she can't |
Dire Heart 4/27/13 . chapter 23I think that the deleted scenes story would be really interesting. I admit, this chapter really brought back some memories for me... |
Chaos-god of balance 4/27/13 . chapter 23A deleted scenes thing does sound interesting, but it really depends on the scene. If it's fairly interesting and makes you wonder why it was left out, then yes I might read it. If it's a chore to read I will not read it. It depends on your judgement as an author. |
Fora Beast 4/27/13 . chapter 23Amazing chapter. By the way I think you should do the 'deleted scenes' file. I want to read the things you left out. |
DestinyPrincess289 3/26/13 . chapter 22Darn it, it'd be so cool if they met. Oh well, update soon, I really like it. |
Arcane Valor 3/16/13 . chapter 22And I'm having a lot of fun reading it. I guess share your thinking, I don't want it to end. |
The Azure Heart 3/16/13 . chapter 22Then don't end it, I wouldn't mind reading your story forever. |
cybermage99 3/14/13 . chapter 22nice chapter she meets nabooru and shiek in the same chapter love it |
Katia0203 3/12/13 . chapter 22Hmm, I'm kind of confused now. So you really were never planning on them meeting? I didn't see that coming :-/ |
Fora Beast 3/12/13 . chapter 22Awesome chapter! And now I can't stop smiling. Please continue |
Arcane Valor 2/28/13 . chapter 21I guess this was good, too. Great work. |
cybermage99 2/28/13 . chapter 21i am cybermage i just got anccount and that name was taken |
cybermage 2/25/13 . chapter 21 i'm startinng to like this story more and more i hope it doesn't get discontinued. one really good fanfiction i was reading got stopped and i was pretty upset it stopped at a cliffhanger too. i don't want that to happen to this story if you ever have trouble like writers block just post a chapter to say so and once i read it i'll try my best to help you out and i'm sure many others would too. your a good author and i want this story to continue. |