Derek's kingdom is Chamburg...it shows the name on the map in the Swan Princess

I remember last Valentines day waking up to the last update...will it happen again this year? Update. The story is to wonderful to waste!

I hope you update soon!

I can see that you haven't updated in a while but please do so soon this story is very good!

Update? Pretty Please :)

I hope you update soon! I want to see some derek odette love!

Very incredible setup! I'm new to the site, so I only just stumbled upon your story. Looking forward to reading the rest of it!

Please write more! I love this story!

Omg, I love your story, although I would like a bit more of Odette in it. Please Update soon!

yes an update, i can't wait to read more so please update when you can.

Are you going to do more ; i love it !

An Update! I have to admit i was jumping for joy when i found this this morning! I too am in college and i can defiantly understand that there are not enough hours in the day. When i first started reading this chapter i was a little disappointed there seemed to be a lot of fluff about the soldiers and what not but i guess that was needed for the locket to be found! Finally something is happening! I would say don't take forever to update but make sure when you do, it has all the love and detail that you have put in the previous chapters. But once again Fantastic STORY!

Thanks for the update! It has been awhile, but I enjoy your story so much.

I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE your story...your detail and emotion make me feel as if i was really there..please dont stop writing i need to know what happens next!

It's so poetic... you are a beautiful writer. This story is crystal clear about their emotions and pains, with no cliches or verbs put to waste. Most stories I see (and ones I write, I'll admit) overuse common words but you find vivid ones instead. I am very impressed, and this is just the prologue! Keep this up!