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Helga 3/7/12 . chapter 2
What did abraxas do to young draco?:O
Melody Syper Carston 7/29/11 . chapter 2
I love how dark this is.
Analie Janes 6/21/11 . chapter 1
Impressively written. It was heartbreaking and I loved that you wrote in Lucius's point of view. Good job! You're a brilliant writer! :)

Analie
Star 3/9/11 . chapter 2
Omg that almost made me cry! People rarely write from Lucius's point of view. poor father and son!
StarMimi 2/27/11 . chapter 2
Amazing!
Aaliyanna's-SeventhHeaven 1/3/11 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness that was brilliant *grins* exactly the type of story I love! Your writing is commendable, really great style :)

Cheers

-A.S.H
Sarah 12/20/10 . chapter 2
Oh wow that was kinda morbid! Don't ya think! Lol

I loved it though
notwolf 12/16/10 . chapter 2
Ah, what a sad story. I suspected Abraxas had done something like that, although I hoped he hadn't. Lucius did the right thing, though the story ended before the dark lord was killed, so he didn't get to see his family intact again.
kaileyrox 12/10/10 . chapter 2
Truly, truly dark but beautiful in a morbid sort of way. Very impressive work.
Maria Mississippi 12/6/10 . chapter 2
Wow...just wow. I wish I could leave you the lengthy review you deserve, but I'm awestruck, I'm at a loss for words, really, I wouldn't say if it wasn't true, if I was just being lazy, be sure I'd say so. So, in lack of anything better to say, that part about the human fingernails made me imagine Snape having an affair with an old hag that had a tray of fingernails when Harry accidentally went to Knockturn Alley.
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