very good new chapter, this story is evolving very well, now its time to build new Warships based on the hulls of the ships on Mars, Battlestars, Battleships,Battlecruisers, Carriers,Destroyers, Frigates, All with advanced shielding. And now also 1st contact with the alliens that the cylons destroyed the homeworld ,and i sincerly hope they have a colony on witch they can rebuild their civilization, with the help of Mankind. And little by liitle A new UFP more powerfull , be created to face the cylons and other threats. Cant ardly wait for the next chapter.

Glad to see an update. It's really getting interesting now, wonder whose ship jus appeared in SOL System? Keep it coming!

I have to admit, I have no memory of adding this story to my alert, nor do I remember reading it at all...and I find myself loving this, the way it ignores the 2nd season is good and of course ignoring the crap called Battlestar Galactica 2003 is even better. I would have liked to see the exploration of the of the star systems, including finding out if the blue people with antenna's existed.

I also would have liked to see at least some survivors of the destroyed planets, there are so many places to hide, its impossible to kill of entire species in such a short time.

Worth the wait as always. This is getting quite interesting. And we have a new player in the game, fascinating. The Council of Idiot, I mean 12 is as helpful as ever, big surprise. More please soon.

great story but eager for more

Very interesting take on the Battlestar Galactica series. It has a lot of potential. Please update soon.

I think that this is a wonderful story, but there are a few errors and self-contradictions at times. If you checked for those, and fixed them, it would be even better. Please continue this sort, it's awesome!

amazing story so far, its been quite a while since the last update, but i hope you continue this story, it will be good to develop even better shields for the Warships of earth and the colonials, eatrh starts building more powerfull warships like Battlecruisers , Heavy Battlecrusiers , Battleships, Dreadnoughts, ,Warstars, That way Humanity will have a very powerfull Navy, Several Fleets, i hope that in the future we encounter other species that become our allies. It would be good to discover a colony of the civiliztion of epsilon eridany.

Hi, just wanted to let you know I discovered your book today and read all 8 chapters without stopping. I found your story and plot interesting and exciting. The only "Negative" comment to make would be that it was a little thin in the depth of character development. Having said that it is far better than anything i have written as I am too lazy and lacking in skill to do what you have done here.

Brownriderco:

I apologize for not reviewing after each chapter; I was caught up into your story and didn't want to stop.

Amazing work! Honestly, you have technical language in here far beyond anything I could begin to understand. I've found that with 'brain' knowledge, creativity falls flat and I become easily bored. NOT SO with your story! You've delivered an education and inscribed so much personality and increasing pace, that I could not be bored.

Your new characters are all fleshed out completely, and each of them communicates with such military preciseness, I am blown away. Then again, I am not familiar with military protocol outside of our media.

It was great fun to see your new characters inter-mingle with the original BSG characters. You had Boomer, Adama and Starbuck very well characterized, as well.

I have to admit, I was surprised at how quickly we transitioned from all the trade negotiations to launch to Mars, but that's okay. Moving the story along is always good.

I would recommend a little more interaction with the original characters, going beyond flight duty especially. It would be even more of a pull for me were they to share culture even more, even to the point of making friends or a possible love interest. Another suggestion is to have dialog between more than 2 people at a time, but just a thought really.

It seems you have left us hanging on a cliffy, albeit I just read this story for the first time. Do you intend to write more and post it?

Thanks for such a great read!

Finish the story

Why are the Terrans kissing ass all of the time especially Perez, I expect them to give away everything but the kitchen sink to the colonials, who are nothing less than space gypsies at this point and should be grateful for what ever they get.

Yeah let's bring the alien humans to Earth's solar system, with the cyclons trailing right behind them, it makes perfect sense.

Very nice, and welcome back. I understand how RL cause problems at times. Between Adama and the admiral to borrow a phrase, "This could be the beginning of a beautiful friendship." Hope to see more soon.

A simply AMAZING story so far.