That was pretty cool. It was original and interesting. I very much liked it!

Hmmmm...very interesting story. Sounds like a twisted "Secret Garden" though...Thinks you could write more? Pleeeaaaassseeee? _

I thought this was well worded, cute, sad, depressing, wry, grammatical, and most importantly, so, so sweet.

You have quite a poetic way of writing. Its very elegant.

I loved your choice of words. They had a very rich, yet simplistic flow to them that was easy to grasp and appreciate.

Thank you for writing this. It truly was masterfully executed.

Greaat story!

I love the SesshoumaruxKagura pairing,

but i'm wondering though..

what happened to Kanna?

Thanx for the read!

It was fantastic, absolutley fantastic! I loved every word of it and I wish I had never read just so I could read it all over again! Yea, I liked it that much!

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much love to this one, and good job getting it done. Finally.

WAHAHAHA /cough

Lovely fairytale I have always love fairytales and yours is really good and original I hope there is more though... Fairytales always end with happily ever after though I hope to have more on after they are together ;)

can't get logged in for some reason...:/ anyways, loving the story even though it's the beginning. :D