Very lovely story. Just one thing, in the last chapter, the epilog, Maggie ist thirteen when she is holding Sophie and then she is fourteen when she is walking away.

Very good work.

OMG

I can't believe how long and how good this story is

I love how well the characters are developed and think the ending is really nice

The idea combining Kerry and Maggie was great

Just love love loved it

Can you write a sequel?

:)

Wow, I didn't think this would take so long to read. Sorry about that.

I really liked it. Maggie is adorable and Chloe :) The friendship between Kerry and Maggie was really believable. I almost cried for Maggie after they left the movie theatre and she started to cry in the car :( I loved the bit in the restaurant when the woman thinks they are a family, I could just picture it and it makes me smile. I'm glad Kerry and Kim have Sophia in the end and another on the way :) I saw on your profile you're writing a sequel? That would be so cool, I'll be looking forward to reading it!

Great work here and hopefully I'll get to read more of your stuff soon. Or Something looks interesting :)

Fisrt of all, i'm so sorry for reviewing this so late, i swear i meant to do it earlier...

but anyway, this epilogue was amazing. It was short and sweet and i just loved to see how things had turned out for them. Maggie and Sophie we're so adorable and just the whole chapter makes me smile and go awwww :) Great writing!

Can't wait for your next story :) (no pressure intended, just that i really enjoy reading your stories)

Awh perfect ending! I love that they finally did have kids and Sophie sounds so cute :) And it was great finding out that Maggie didn't need her crutches anymore, that was unexpected but really great :)

Not much more I can say except Well done :)

It's been a while since you've gotten a review from me, huh? ;) Just wanted to let you know that I really liked this chapter. It brings a nice closure to the story. Good job!

Awwwww! So sweet! :D This last chapter had me smiling but mixed with some sadness. This has been a great story and i'm sad that it's ending :/ I hope you get the epilogue out soon :D I think i might go and read this all again on one sitting, I miss it already! Haha

Aww yay! This was such a sweet story. I just love Kerry and Kim. Probably more than any other pairing. But you did a fantastic job with this. As always. Can't wait to see what you have in the epilogue. : )

Such a sweet ending :)

SO SWEET!

We were promised an epilogue, weren't we?

I couldn't take it if it was over already!

"Why do you like them?" Liam asked.

"What's rugby?" Maggie added.

"Where in the world is Kenya?" Chloe screeched.

Hysterical and such a very accurate reaction from three young kids!

Awwww! How sweet! :D This whole chapter had me smiling so much. I could see everything in my mind and it's just... awwww :)

Definitely had me smiling the whole way through. Very nice names on all the relatives, too.

When Kerry first saw the two women looking at her, I knew they were going to think Liam, Maggie and Chloe were their children :) It was a nice touch :)

The only downside for the whole chapter (and it has nothing to do with what you wrote, only my own unobservance... again) I didn't know Liam was 11. I thought he was between Maggie and Chloe. I really have to pay more attention to what I'm reading, haha.

Great chapter :)I'm sad it's almost over!

Only two more left? I really hope you do write some sort of epilogue... but that's just me wanting to read more awesomeness!

This was again, (i feel like i'm repeating myself) an absolutely gorgeous chapter. You could have handled it any way, but you chose a a beautiful but heartwrenching way and i think it worked really well. I'd love to see their family one day *sigh*

I just love Maggie! She's just so cute and when she said "even with only one hand" I actually laughed out loud. It was very cute the way she came out with it :) And I'm so glad Kerry is coming around to the having kids idea, I love Kerry and Kim when they have kids!

Great chapter :) Can't wait to read the rest!