| Reviews for Asleep |
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14AmyChan 5/10/12 . chapter 1cute! *_* |
Mrs. Ferb Fletcher-inator 10/2/11 . chapter 1ohh so cute, poor Isabella though. That's what she gets for liking the oblivious one. |
8711 9/18/11 . chapter 1VERY cute! :D i could almost picture this really happening. X) |
PhoenixWormwood137 9/9/11 . chapter 1AwwWWWWww! LOVE IT! And "How'd you DO that" was funny :D SO CUTE. |
myjumpingsocks 9/5/11 . chapter 1This was so adorable! I awww-ed :) |
A Reviewing Reader 8/10/11 . chapter 1Yeah, this is most DEFINITELY not tragic. It's so adorable. So fluffy. (: I just...this is adorable. 3 3 3 In case these doesn't show up, supposed to be hearts. Ary |
Sringer0 7/28/11 . chapter 1HAHAHAH*Cough spluter* , ahhh... *Hack* so fluffy that I drowned. I love it |
4RAINYNITE 7/21/11 . chapter 1That is so cute. You got everyone's personality just right. |
MidnightWritings 6/24/11 . chapter 1Your descriptions of this story are really good! It's soooo cute, I love it :) |
BookJunkie 2/12/11 . chapter 1So cute! I'd like to know why all of them are riding on a bus together thought... Perhaps a second chapter? Maybe? Haha :) (Nice addition with Doof and Perry, btw!) |
digigirl02 1/17/11 . chapter 1Nice, Ferb asleep on her sounds really cute. I hope she waits up for him. I also like the Perry the platypus bit as well. |
fluggerbutter 1/4/11 . chapter 1*fangirly giggle* Teehee. D'awww. Adorableness defined. |
AlreadyOnMars 12/31/10 . chapter 1That was cute! My only question is where are they going and why are they all travelling together? |
Xellda 12/22/10 . chapter 1*We're sorry this reviewer is currently holding back fangirl squees and uncalled for amounts of awwing. Please hold. BEEEEPPPP* Literally that was all I was going for the majority of reading this. That was so cute! 3 Xellda |
Walkazo 12/21/10 . chapter 1Another great story: Linda is right - Ferb IS so cute! The entire thing is perfect: Doofenshirtz's reaction to Perry, Phineas's drooling, Isabella's scheming, and even the setting itself of a chance encounter between the two groups on a bus-ride home after an undoubtedly eventful day (for the boys, at least). The little bit of melancholy about the lack of warmth between Vanessa and her actual boyfriend just made the entire thing more touching, somehow. Keep up the awesome work! |