Reviews for Asleep
14AmyChan 5/10/12 . chapter 1
cute! *_*
Mrs. Ferb Fletcher-inator 10/2/11 . chapter 1
ohh so cute, poor Isabella though. That's what she gets for liking the oblivious one.
8711 9/18/11 . chapter 1
VERY cute! :D i could almost picture this really happening. X)
PhoenixWormwood137 9/9/11 . chapter 1
AwwWWWWww! LOVE IT! And "How'd you DO that" was funny :D SO CUTE.
myjumpingsocks 9/5/11 . chapter 1
This was so adorable! I awww-ed :)
A Reviewing Reader 8/10/11 . chapter 1
Yeah, this is most DEFINITELY not tragic. It's so adorable. So fluffy. (:

I just...this is adorable. 3 3 3 In case these doesn't show up, supposed to be hearts.

Ary
Sringer0 7/28/11 . chapter 1
HAHAHAH*Cough spluter* , ahhh... *Hack* so fluffy that I drowned.

I love it
4RAINYNITE 7/21/11 . chapter 1
That is so cute. You got everyone's personality just right.
MidnightWritings 6/24/11 . chapter 1
Your descriptions of this story are really good! It's soooo cute, I love it :)
BookJunkie 2/12/11 . chapter 1
So cute! I'd like to know why all of them are riding on a bus together thought... Perhaps a second chapter? Maybe? Haha :) (Nice addition with Doof and Perry, btw!)
digigirl02 1/17/11 . chapter 1
Nice, Ferb asleep on her sounds really cute. I hope she waits up for him. I also like the Perry the platypus bit as well.
fluggerbutter 1/4/11 . chapter 1
*fangirly giggle* Teehee. D'awww. Adorableness defined.
AlreadyOnMars 12/31/10 . chapter 1
That was cute! My only question is where are they going and why are they all travelling together?
Xellda 12/22/10 . chapter 1
*We're sorry this reviewer is currently holding back fangirl squees and uncalled for amounts of awwing. Please hold. BEEEEPPPP*

Literally that was all I was going for the majority of reading this. That was so cute! 3

Xellda
Walkazo 12/21/10 . chapter 1
Another great story: Linda is right - Ferb IS so cute! The entire thing is perfect: Doofenshirtz's reaction to Perry, Phineas's drooling, Isabella's scheming, and even the setting itself of a chance encounter between the two groups on a bus-ride home after an undoubtedly eventful day (for the boys, at least). The little bit of melancholy about the lack of warmth between Vanessa and her actual boyfriend just made the entire thing more touching, somehow.

Keep up the awesome work!
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