|Reviews for Best Intentions|
| Icy Metal and Frost Blue Roses 1/5/13 . chapter 13
Just finished reading all the chappters and OMG this was really really good! I read this story a few years before I had an account and loved it! Being able to read this again was worth me spending the past few months trying to find it again considering last time I had forgotten this story's title :D When are you updating again?! I must know what happens next! You did an excellent job on this! Keep it up! :D
| CurationLethe 12/21/12 . chapter 13
I can't believe this story ended. I'm reeling that about that fact, just to let you know. This was a work of art, in the highest standard. It had everything that a perfect story needs, (although I was in such desperation to finish it, I skipped over a lot of Helens parts in the story, but that didn't interest me that much anyway :))
You've done a fantastic job of taking these characters, gently leading them down the direction the story took and helping them develop in a believable way. I loved this and desperately urge you to proceed with a sequel. A sequel would be fabulous! (You could use the biscuit baking in this story to incorporate a quirky catch phrase to indicate an addition to Underland.. Something along the lines of.. "It seemed Alice had finally perfected biscuit making... Only this one was topped with a few wisp of ginger..." If you can catch the drift :)
Again, this was magnificent! Great work!
| Vick Vaporub 8/25/12 . chapter 11
I have yet to see a single mistake on this entire piece of story. Most of my headcanons are here and in another fiction called "The Yearning" by wonderwoundedhearers. You should read it, it is a good one (the first one I ever read of this fandom and specific shipper Halice); I have began forming the sketches of a fanfiction myself about Hatter/Alice but I'm afraid my English is not too 'formal' - for lack of a better term - for a fiction of them. Also the thing I am most scared is to characterize them off their wonderful personalities.
I am currently re-watching the movie, re-reading the books (although the story between them is tad bit different) and reading a lot of the fanfiction displayed to this site so I can learn better how to fully express themselves and to gain some more vocabulary.
I'll definitely favorite this story and you as author.
| Pineapple-Sorceress 8/16/12 . chapter 3
Oh god! I was curious, so I did the math. If 15 minutes in Aboveland is 3 days in Underland, then 3 months in Aboveland is 72.0000002 YEARS in Underland! Holy crap!
| Sesshomaru's Babydoll 11/25/11 . chapter 13
This was an entertaining and enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing :)
| buddhistbabe 9/26/11 . chapter 13
I really really enjoyed this piece of writing. I liked your details and explanations on choices. Bravo. Possibly the best, long, AiW story on this site.
| DaAmazingMeepers 8/29/11 . chapter 13
Okay, I am absolutely in love with this story! You did a fantastic job, with only a few typos and grammar mistakes here and there, and everyone's personalities were spot on! I'm definitely interested in reading more of your stories!3
| James Birdsong 8/28/11 . chapter 13
| Peregrinate 8/27/11 . chapter 12
I freakin' love how you did Mirana.
"That should do it," Mirana said, cheerfully. "Good show, Sir Hamish! I wasn't sure if you were going to be a sport about this or not!"
and with her giving him cake! :D
| Peregrinate 8/27/11 . chapter 11
Go Hamish! :D
| Mahasana 8/25/11 . chapter 10
Continue the story, please it is very interesting...
| Seraphim-Burning 8/19/11 . chapter 10
Absolutely lovely story. I see you've strayed away from the fandom (I have too I'm afraid) but I do hope that you find the time to finish it. It really was a pleasure to read.
| Nuttycheychey 8/1/11 . chapter 10
Oh oh oh! I doo beg/implore/ask/wish for/hope/pray you continue this story! It has a lot of potential and its very interesting to follow. (please also, a sequal to Possible Side Effects would be nice too! ;D)
| Cheyenne32 4/26/11 . chapter 10
Amazing. I'm in love with this!
| fairfarrenlovelylydia 4/21/11 . chapter 10
This story gets better and better with each chapter! I am really enjoying this! And you have such patience as an author I am astounded; I would have wanted to have Alice come around much sooner than you have but it adds such depth to the story as well.
It was good coincidence I was able to catch up on this story today because I've had Mumford and Son's song Little Lion Man stuck in my head...and it just fits this chapter perfectly!
I can't wait for more!