i read this a long time ago, but i've finally gotten into registering for and stuff, so i wanted to say how much i enjoyed this.

I added this story to my favorites list.

God bless you.

it's so beautiful...touching. *sigh* good on u

hmm... interesting

Gavroche

I liked it! Really good! One thing though, Jean isn't a cheerleader, she's the star soccer player. I remember this one episoed where this cheerleader said, "Since when did girl jocks become more popluar than cheerleaders?". Any, great job!

That was incredible. Nuff said.

Very nice. Thank you very much for a pleasant read. Liked the doom-ending. Liked the style and the spirit better. Wish an x-series would be like this again. Alan Davis's runs on excalibur come close.

that was absolutely beautiful. poetic bet you drive the girls crazy with your sweet dialect.

Se manufic! Oh, gosh, your good at this. ::Looks up in addoring puppy dog eyes:: Wowwwww...

Wonderful.

So, I'm relatively new to this whole fanfiction thing, and I figured that I would go back to see what was happening when this site was just kicking off (and I was out of the comics loop). I am really glad I did - this is a truly fine story. Wistful, sober and sentimental at the same time.

Well done, not only as a story, but also in preserving the same kind of tone as the 'Marvels' comic which inspired it without being a mere copy. Congratulations.

This was a beautifully written story!

One word truly describes this story... excellent. I was pure poety, and an honor to read.

Pithy. Eloquent. Touching. The character arc of Joey Bilotti and his view (and relationship) with Jean Gray are well told. Something happens, something changes, and this story is all about love.