|Reviews for The Wedding|
| andnoneforgretchenweiners 4/6/13 . chapter 6
i stumbled on this today and im so glad i did!
your writing is refreshing and eloquent!
i hope you update soon!
| ANON93 4/2/13 . chapter 5
"It wasn't until her back was pressed to the wall and she felt Sasuke, hard and thick against her thigh, that she forced logic through the haze in her mind. She needed to stop,"
I looked up to see the rating of this fanfic and saw- M
Now I can't stop smiling.. :3
| Kiara 4/2/13 . chapter 6
Your awsome keep going
| Nafsi-chan 4/2/13 . chapter 6
Well what can I say? I simply LOVE this story! Every chapter makes me rolling on the ground with laughter! The situation that Sasuke and Hinata get themselves in are just so humorous! Now, I must admit that SasuHina isn't my OTP (Naruhina all the way!) but it's DEFINITELY my second favorite pairing! So yeah, I LOVE IT! Keep the chapters comin, 'cause I can't wait for the next one!
| Guest 3/31/13 . chapter 6
I can't believe i didn't see that there was a new chapter out. Awesome as always. Very very glad you're back XD
| heza-chan24 3/31/13 . chapter 6
I am so loving this story! I favorited a picture and in the tag line it said it was based on this story. I am so happy to have run across it. I can't wait read what happens next!
| cb142 3/31/13 . chapter 6
I didn't get to review (since I was reading on my phone XD) but now I will!
THIS IS SO EXCITING! EVERY CHAPTER IS SO INTRIGUING! *A* I was so sad when chapter 6 ended ;_; I hope you update soon but, please, do take your time! 3 :3 Stories/art is always best when time is taken wisely :D Since we need inspiration :3
| dancingwithinsanity 3/31/13 . chapter 6
I think I'm in love with this story...
You're doing an awesome job writing this! You manage to keep everyone in character and do an amazing job with the story line. Please continue this and update soon!
| Ro0w'z 3/1/13 . chapter 6
| Ro0w'z 3/1/13 . chapter 4
for me going at a pace fast but credible
| Ro0w'z 3/1/13 . chapter 3
| Ro0w'z 3/1/13 . chapter 2
| Ro0w'z 3/1/13 . chapter 1
waaa is just what you need to read right now! and that many do not like the couple ItachixTemari, but I do! if you like there are a couple of very good "firefly" in short, everything is going great and his character is as it should be.
excuse my ugly English
| jt09 2/25/13 . chapter 6
This story reminds me of a chick-flick, and I mean that as a compliment. Most SasuHina stories I've read are heavy on the angst and drama and usually involve some sort of arranged marriage, or 'forced-together' situation. Don't get me wrong, a lot of them are very well written but I like how light and fluffy your story is, it's very refreshing to read.
The Wedding was the first M/C SasuHina story I'd ever read, and I'll admit when I first started I was skeptical. Sasuke and Hinata are NOT the first couple I'd ever imagined getting together in the Naruto-verse. Or the second. Or the third. I was curious to see if you could bring together two people with entirely different personalities, and make their story both believable and enjoyable. In my opinion you're doing a wonderful job and I love what you've written so far :)
I like your rebellious, playboy Sasuke and his 'fuck the world, I do what I want' attitude. Especially towards his father. I love stories where Sasuke gets to the point where he's just sick of battling for daddy's attentions and always coming second to Itachi. And so he just stops bothering coz it's not worth the effort :\
Speaking of Itachi, I also love the dynamic between the two brothers; how protective Itachi is of Sasuke and how Itachi is the one person Sasuke would do anything for. At the same time, I love how they're both still able to argue and give each other shit because what else are brothers for? That scene where Itachi walked in on Sasuke wanking made me laugh so much :3
I've already mentioned how I'm not much of a SasuHina shipper, mostly because I've always imagined Sasuke falling for someone with a forceful personality, someone stubborn enough to push past the walls he likes to erect. Before you ask, I am talking about Naruto and yes, SasuNaru is my OTP :P I'm not actually a massive yaoi fan and I can't see anything romantic happening between the two in canon, but personality-wise, Naruto is the kind of person I'd always imagined Sasuke ending up (happy) with. Which is why SasuHina has never really caught my attention.
Now, I quite like Hinata. She's sweet, polite, has an amazing body (I lol'd at Temari and her comment about Hina's boobs). She also has a bigger backbone than most people give her credit for. I find her love for Naruto cute, and if I were to pick a couple most likely to become canon, it would be NaruHina. Sasuke and Hinata barely interact in the Naruto-verse, and even if Sasuke hadn't left Konoha I doubt they'd have much more to do with each other, mainly because their personalities are so different. Hinata's so quiet and unassuming and has no interest in Sasuke AT ALL so he probably wouldn't even notice her :/
To me, your version of Hinata is spot-on what I'd imagine her to be in canon a few years on. Still so sweet, polite, caring, but with more self-confidence and a much stronger belief in herself. I liked the way you had her break up with Naruto and still remain good friends with him, coz I can totally imagine her doing something like that. But what I especially loved was how you managed to convince me that SasuHina is a viable couple after all, despite their personality differences.
In The Wedding I like how Sasuke feels the need to be a nicer person around Hinata. I like how he can sense that her kindness is genuine, rather than a contrived effort to get into his pants. I like how he wants more from Hinata than just to get into HER pants, although I also like his efforts so far because SasukeSex HOTTTTT and I'm drooling just thinking about it ;) I like how he's putting in the effort to open up and share more about himself, and I especially like how Hinata's determined to make her own mind up about Sasuke, rather than judging him based on what she's heard through the grapevine.
Through your writing I am able to see that Sasuke and Hinata could be very good for one another. Her patience and gentle kindness are a great balance for his stubborn, caustic personality. I am definitely looking forward to seeing how their relationship plays out. Thanks for showing me the power of SasuHina, and thanks for writing such a great story. I hope you update soon
| ascho 2/22/13 . chapter 6
I just found your fic today, and I read it in one go. I have to say that this is probably one of the most refreshing fics I have read recently.
There are so many elements to your story that you execute well! The wedding scenario, their unusual attraction to each other (which they admit to, to themselves at least) and the influence of people around them. You've translated the shinobi verse excellently into a modern day world.
Though you describe your fiction as fluffy, I find it really charming as you have kept the characters so close to their personality, that I don't second guess their actions. Their awkward interaction is believable, as they are such opposites and would naturally misunderstand each other
This is one of the best modern day fictions that I have read!