A very nice... short... little story... *Smirks*

Entertaining, though, and some of it does make sense.

Eh, I like it. And Cthulu's a bonus.

I agree, LadyKayoss captures the essence (spirits?) of the FF:TSW characters most vividly. I'm jealous! :p

wow your story is very good, i just can't stop reading it, i hope u keep writing it

Yay! *cheers and wanders around being all psycho creepy* And tis not *that* rushed, bud. Tis better than anything I can produce right now, so be happy, ne?

Very, very, *very* good story! I simply love the way you write Neil. Some authors can really capture the "voice" of a character, and you are truly one of them. (Throughout all these chapters his own actions, as well as his interactions with others, just seem so natural and in character. Great job!)

And yay! I'm a cultist! (Hmm, the "saner" one. Well, we know *that's* just an act! *wink*) Guess now we know where Neil found out about the scanners! Can't wait for more!

Come now! It's not as bad as you let on...

Seeing names I recognize is pretty odd, in a fun sort of way.

And a 'Finally' is in order, even if not completely necessary.

Oh good! Another piece from you, I was wondering where you went? (wink) I like the depth that you have given to the Jane/Neil interaction.

Hee! Muchos fun! Trust Neil to drop himself in it! *won't even make a comment about Hein, but will be content with the thought of him as a vampire* Mmm... Cultalicious... _

Oooooohhhhhhhh... Yay! Uhm... Yay? *coughs* I hate leaving short reviews, but I loveses these stories.

Oooooh. Evil Jane. _ Wonder who fired the cannon... I know you're pretty tied up with "OotA" and "Salvation" right now, but this looks interesting... Can I be in the cult? Pleeeeeeeeeeease? *evil grin* You know I'd make a good cult member. I'm sure I asked you this before, but there's no harm in doubling my chances, ne? *wide, cheesy grin*

niiccceee! love it so far. As for names... *snickers* I can voluteer some of my friends jsut to annoy them. I'll e-mail them to you so people will be surprised.

Finally! I really enjoyed Neil's intro into the squad. And I'm really looking forward to more of the team's interaction... that's always a plus to any TSW fic.

Hurrah! *Grins* I like it! I was just thinking about something like this, too... (Time wise)

Heh, I know you'd probably like something more than that but... *Shakes head* It's all I can come up with at the moment.