Very nice tie-in at the end.

It's not a monster. It's freaking gorgeous.

Hmm. I just skimmed the first and last chapters. I really like the ideas, but I absolutely can't say the same about the pairing. /Sobs.

And here I was hoping for at least some onesided Allen to Kanda angst. :c

The interactions between Kanda and Allen are cute, though.

This story's really, really different, in an especially good sort of way. I'm glad for Kanda - he's finally found his peace - and for the rest of the crew, since most of them are still alive and more or less safe, and I loved your ending - it rounded up everything really well. It's been an awesome read.

Just wondering, though - was this story kind of based on what Cross said, 'bout there being a third side to this war?

*flailing*

OMG, Eia.

You AMAZING

This was mind-blowingly beautiful, heart-rending and utterly FANTASTIC. Guh.

*flails incoherently some more*

This whole story was gorgeous. The characters were beautifully done, and I loved Kanda's hate and rage and love. I could go on and on and on about all of the things I loved - Lavi and Krory staying with the Order, Lilith and Neah, Hell (though if Hell is real and anything like that...o.O), Allen and Neah's relationship, the Earl and Neah...- it was just. All. So. Wonderful. The ending was also perfect. Amazing work.

I am a new and very happy super-fan. XD

Maybe a sequel where they all reunite?

I enjoyed reading this very much. It got confusing at times, but it never lost its sense of mystery for me. This might contradict the canon plot at times, but its undoubtedly one of the best DGM fanfiction pieces I've read in some time. Thanks for posting this!

I like how this is turning out :D Lilith-Hevlaska is certainly a very nice person!

This was by far the most captivating chapter. And the last line was :O It was shocking and yet very much to be expected.

The tension's growing now mmm and it was quite amazingly thought out, the way you linked dark matter and innocence and human magic.

The way you included Hevlaska into the story was slightly unnerving but also very original (though it deviates from canon).

This was a rather intriguing chapter; it makes me want to read on. The little scene between Kanda and Lavi was also pretty touching, in a way.

The writing here is really darned pretty (but I suppose that's only to be expected of a writer like you). It was quite poignant too, both ways. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Woah. Just woah.

It was unbelievable. Somehow, the way you wrote it softened the impact of its controversial subject and made it appear more like a fantasy story. The ending was rather cliche, but the events that led up overrode that fact. Overall, it was pretty amazing :D