wow- this is a fantastic chapter! the characters seem really believable and its very well written

Naww. I love it.

There is an error though,just a few words in.

- "'I know in there Aubrey.' resounded from the other side of the closed door."

Hi. It's me! The other fangirl.

And I just have to repeat that THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! thing. Because it's wonderful to have new fanfic, it's wonderful to see AC as older, and, okay, this actually makes their getting married seem viable this early in the piece. Which is a new one on me.

Ooh! yayayayay fanfic. TREMENDOUS EXCITEMENT!

Also, one point: About 5 lines in, Caroline says "I know in there Aubrey". Would I be correct in a suggestion that there should be a "you're" in there?

And YAYYAYAY! FANFIC! FAN SODDING FIC! FAN! FIC!

GOOD fanfic!

Oh my goodness this is epic!