 One Fine Wire 12/8/10 . chapter 1First off, I'm really glad to see that there are some more Sid-centric stories on the "Hey Arnold!" site. To me, Sid has always been a complex character: he tries to keep cool and act edgy when he's really insecure deep down. However, I did like his growth in this story and how you narrated the way he changed over the years.
There's a lot to dissect in this story, such as Helga's suicide, Arnold and Frankie G.'s obviously one-sided relationship and how our favorite Football-Head fell into such an arrangement in the first place, Frankie G.'s drug use, and his ultimate downfall. There were a few spelling errors here and there, but your oneshot is intriguing and really makes the reader think about what would make the characters in this story make the decisions that they do.
Good job! :) |