Omg! Wow the ending was so scarry Ivcant wait to see Moreeeeeee

Really good please update soon!

Oh wow, what an excellent chapter

OH NOOOOO!

You officially got me hooked with this story! {D

More please! I think I'll really enjoy this. :)

Awe pooooooor Carlos...He is so sick and unhealthy! :( Kendall should kiss him and make it all better :) lol

I'm excited to see where this goes. :) Great beginning so far!

By the way, any chance you'll update "Internal Warfare" sometime soon?

This story is off to a great start.I can't wait to read more. Poor Carlos.

I LOVE THIS STORY!

I love it sooo much. Really great work :D

I can't leave an epic review right now, cause I gotta go to fencing, but this was really great!

I promise to leave you an awesomer review next time O.O

Update soon!

This is really great so far :)... Although, I'm preparing myself for tears :(

Hey! I loved this... Anything with Carlos in it is golden to me :) This was reli well written and I hope you update fast (this is a multi-chapter story...right?) :D

Anyway, can't wait for more!

addicted-2-oxygen x

I think I know where this is going.

And I'm sad already. BUT I WANT TO MAKE SURE CARLOS DOESN'T DIE, SO. *waits apprehensively for the next chapters*

I think this is a great ideacfor a story

Hope u write more Soon

Ooh. Juicy.

This'll be good, I know it.

This is really good. I can't wait for more! :)