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Crona's past only with kid and a little twist?! NIIIIIIIICEE!

I love this story , it explains Kids life and why he has those stripes in his hair. I also think it shows that no matter how much someone gives you pain theres always a person to be the cure.
This is the way life is, everyone wishes to change somthing about there past . thow, life goase on ... and we all build it diffrent ways.

See if u can unscramble these letters:
dhteadethidk

Did you figure it out? If so, Unsramble these letters:
lstraabkc

Now do these ones:
sbaitku

olus

zli

atpyt

amka

intse

dasume

rdol atedh

psirti

iamra

sorry i just like to make people think

BEST SOUL EATER STORY I HAVE EVER READ!

I love it please make more soon

Update!

Please please please finish this! I'm loving it!

awesome and poor kid TT

Wow, good story! Is it finished yet? If not update soon!

Wow! Good job! I think your version of Kid's mom and backstory is fascinating and ties things up pretty neatly. I do wonder why she has the stripes in her hair as well, though, or did you decide that he ended up getting those from his mom instead of his dad? Though... later you said that Kid basically has identical DNA to his father. Could you clarify this for me? I prefer the identical DNA thing and would just assume the hair is coincidental.

May I suggest story breaks between scenes/parts? Just to help us readers notice the changes?

Awww, what a different way to look at Kid's missing past! An evil abusing witch mother, huh? I actually haven't read anything like that yet, cool! This was awesome, thank you for writing it!

This is really good, please update soon!