short and sweet :) very nice!

Really enjoyed this tender moment ... very tastefully written ... left me wanting more. Nice pairing.

*runs tongue over teeth* I better go brush.

Wow, I really like this pairing & the premise! Lorne is so sweet in it; I love him. :) Totally fits his personality that he'd be great with kids. However, I have to say that the ending was sooo OOC for both of them. Evan wouldn't move that fast and Teyla has that inborn dignity that would make her answer far differently. But other than those ending lines I liked this fanfic :)

Never really liked the Teyla/Lorne pairing, but this one's great! I love it!