Quite good.

Sad game, very well plotted though.

I like this fic, well written and articulate. Definite new favorite of mine now.

That was truly very well written. I love the amount of emotion you put in it. The characters were so believable and interesting. It was really sad, but in a way happy.

Interesting story, nicely written. But one thing bothers me though, Zach is also a brunette but trauma turned his hair white.