What a perfect ending loved it.

What a lovely ending, thank you!

Lynn

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Another great story down! I cant figure out why people always fix on mac!

a truly beautiful ending worthy of such a great fic! Thank you!

Now start writing the next one and this time on computer, not paper! :D

A sweet rounding off to a very enjoyable story. 'Twas sad that Loren shot herself in the foot career-wise, but she really couldn't have gotten off scot-free.

I also liked the 'not yet' when she talked about family, a nod in the direction of her loss, but without any associated angst-fest.

Thank you.

Wonderful chapter.

Lovely ending - even if it doesn't say much.

So are we going to get a sequel of sorts to describe the new life - as an advocate for victims of domestic abuse?

I would love to read a sequel.

This has been such a wonderful story and pairing with a great ending! Maybe your should have written the ending to Mass Effect 3? I'm so sad to see this story end. Please write some more-I love your stuff!

Very nicely done. One of the nicest and sweetest JAG fanfics I've read. Alternate pairing and "NO" character bashing. Great job.

Loved it, unwitty - bravo!

Yes! They've finally admitted that they love each other, yippee! I know they shouldn't have done it in the office, but thankfully they weren't caught out, at least I hope no-one saw them! It was nice to know that Tad was the baby's father, he seems a really nice guy, and mistakes happen especially where alcohol is involved. I fully understand why she didn't name him. Can't wait to read what happens next.

Lynn

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Very nice Chapter. Loren & Harm finally admitted their love for each other. Now its time for the monkey wrench's!

At last they have both said those 3 magic words "I LOVE YOU" were they seen cuddling in her office can't wait to find out?

Very nice chapter. Good to know who the baby's father was. Great to see them admit their feelings for each other. Please don't make Mac a bitch in this when she finds out as others have. Please let Mac move on and find someone of her own so that the four of them could stay as friends.

Good to finally find out who the baby's father was.

URGENT - you really really need to change the location of that last discussion.

They were NOT in Loren's office - they should have been at either Harms home or Lorens home.

You cannot admit your feelings and then kiss someone like that at JAG and NOT be in trouble for breaking the frat regs.

Sorry but the frat regs are part of the entire JAG canon...

But they can do that at either his or her apartment.

Great to see you posting gain!

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"He can investigate me if he wants." Harriet murmured, still lost in a daze.

Bud turned back to his wife, horror struck,

* * * ROFL!

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"Commander, this is Lieutenant Tad Williams, an old friend from the Academy

* * * I have some bad feelings with the vibes, the hidden sonogram, her question about her court case...

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"Your friend Tad seemed nice."

* * * All he needs now is a pole and one of those ridiculous hats. :D

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"He was also the baby's father."

* * * Crap. I had a feeling when she turned the sonogram down, but then the invitation... Crap.

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"I love you Loren. I have for a long time now."

"I love you too Harm."

* * * Woohoo! Finally!

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In a way it's a good thing to know Lindsey didn't pass on his genes (even temporarily), on the other hand it's worse as this guy is obviously a good guy (who made a mistake, unfortunately) and means something to Loren (even if not that way), plus will obviously stick around. It maybe cruel and insensitive, but for Harm and Loren as a couple and individuals, the way things went was the best.

Please update soon!