| Reviews for Jane's Dilemma |
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Alfonsina.d 3/30/11 . chapter 12you've shown that family life can co-exist with the more extreme/dangerous life. it is good that you give the guys (so far) some balance to all of the violence and drama. good times. |
Alfonsina.d 3/30/11 . chapter 11you prove over and over again that no one is who he/she appears to be. I think it is what makes your stories fun. |
Alfonsina.d 3/30/11 . chapter 10you two need to get a fairy godmother for the guys - let them have at least one night when they aren't on call or aren't called ... geez. well done. |
Alfonsina.d 3/30/11 . chapter 9can I get the ESP gene? great that it runs in the family! |
Alfonsina.d 3/30/11 . chapter 8in so many ways boys are always 'little' no matter the age ... love how Lester is basically saying 'dibs' and 'I saw her first'. well done. |
Alfonsina.d 3/30/11 . chapter 7babe(s), ALL great writers have love triangles! some days it is the guy, the girl, and his (or her) mirror/ego/wallet. love that Anthony is a potential for Jane - at least short term! brava! |
Alfonsina.d 3/30/11 . chapter 6I love how you bring 'real' people and situations into your stories. I can just 'see' Ranger and friends at some pretty exclusive spots - you do them all justice. |
Mik N'jirnav 1/30/11 . chapter 13Ah dear me...what is that little child doing up at 4:47 am wondering around the house while the adults are sleeping? I used to do that as a preschooler (and older) ...get up and wander around the house in the middle of the night while everyone else in the house was sleeping. I wonder if she climbs on the kitchen counters and hunts out the candy and gets into it like I did? |
Barb4psu 1/30/11 . chapter 13love Anthony would love to see more of Jane/Les |
Wanda517 1/30/11 . chapter 13dear, dear Anthony. ilike him, but not as much as Ranger surprised Zoe didn't curl up by him, too. |
Barb4psu 1/29/11 . chapter 12love mercenary Ranger - only he could find someone to shoot at toys r us |
Rangerette2388 1/29/11 . chapter 12I hope we get to know more about Jane and what she really does. And her relationship with Anthony and Lester. Surely, you aren't going to leave us high and dry on those 3. |
Ziandra2010 1/29/11 . chapter 12It would be nice to have more background on Jane. You just threw it in there and left it. Rather frustrating. |
Wanda517 1/29/11 . chapter 12very cute. love baby goth Julie. i want more story on Jane...what's up with her? |
Ziandra2010 1/29/11 . chapter 1Now we see how Lester opreates. I think Lester should be nicknamed the chamelion. Mercenary, jokester, but we seldom see the ladie's man you revealed here. |