I think you should have had August come back before Louis left so he could tell them who Wizard was. Give Louis a different reason to beat Wizard's ass. Though this is a far more valid reason.

This was actually a nice christmas story sighhh i loveee the movie August Rush and this is the first story I've ever read on it and I'm reading it in August hmm silly me lol good job though I really liked it

omg scary stuffs, and mushy cute fluffiness :D 3

I thought this was quite out-of-the-blue and hilarious. Of course, the rape part got me seriously shocked, but everything else was sweet and a good read.

I liked it.

Love,

Emily

3 ;_)