aww, that was like a perfect ending. the only thing i have to say was that that there were a few errors such as you writing here instead of hear. but over all i realllly loved this story, esp. the ending!

:( it's so sad. with your permission, may i continue it as a 2 shot but it will have full credits to you.

you have a beautiful fluency to your words. i loved it, though the ending was surprising. made me cry :'(

oh, and i noticed you put a U in the word colour, and if that was just a typo then, okay, sweet still love you :p

but if you put it there purposley, I LOVE YOU! OMG, I LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE YOU! Canada 3

omg. that was intense

Great story it could go many places so please update soon xxxx

GOODLUCK WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER , UPDATE SOON XXX

Awwww! Sooooooo sad! It is beautifully written. :)

whoa. T.T made my eyes tear up. when i read the 'warning character death' i was all prepared for it, then i was reading the story and i totally forgot and i got to the end and i was all confused, like '...they died?:(' then i remembered. lol.

Wonderfully bittersweet. :'(

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There are... no words.. - Horrifying, yet brilliant. Please, write more. :)

okay . . . I would've liked it a lot more if you didn't kill Will at the end . . . I was expecting Jem. Jem's okay but Will is my favorite . . . Even if he isn't a jerk.