| Reviews for It Would Have Been Wonderful |
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spuffygurl11 4/14/05 . chapter 1 That's so sad! It's great but sad great [sniffle] job! [Crying] |
Culf 12/29/03 . chapter 1 No... Not Spike's only chance at being a father! He will have another chance, right? He and Buffy will have a child! Course they will! |
the charmed citlali 6/28/03 . chapter 1I lost it on that last sentence. Thank you very much. It was wonderful |
suniblaze 6/12/02 . chapter 1 hey, A. Price! i liked your sweetly sad story. thanks, suni. |
kly 3/13/02 . chapter 1 I love it! I love it! I love it! Especially the last line. |
kait 3/13/02 . chapter 1 Very good storyline. A few suggestions, with which you may do as you please. First, Buffy's fight scene is a run-on sentence; maybe break it up a bit. Second, the overall essence of the story is melancholic and beautiful - but the final sentence deters from that and almost cheapens it. It might carry better without it. Again, these are meant to be helpful and to be taken with a pound of salt. Kudos for story! kait |
ILLK 3/12/02 . chapter 1Awww! Too sweet! Too sweet! Very nice! I like it! |
violetmist 3/12/02 . chapter 1Wonderful! I totally loved it... Write more B/S fics! |
Misty Eyes 3/12/02 . chapter 1 That was sooo sweet, I don't usually cry, but this had me in tears! |