All I can say about the ending is awwww. :)

What a clever idea, tying in Good Omens and Dogma. I'm a fan of both and I must admit that whenever I hear the Metatron referenced I do think of Alan Rickman!

A very enjoyable read and I particularly enjoyed the interaction between Crowley and Azriphale, especially when he was so desperate to show that he'd never do to him what Bartleby did to Loki.

Great job :)

Hehehehehehehe. What more be said?

Loved the plants.

I really liked the story :)

but ah man, why did it stop!

You do not need to beg. We, your readers, need to beg. Please write more. Prety, pretty, please. With sugar on top. And sprinkles. And a cherry.

Ah, Crowley's poor plants. And a Dogma/GO crossover! I've struck gold! :D!

This story is great. The closet thing makes sense in a kind of creepy way. Poor Bartleby and Loki.
Nice portrayal of Zira and Crowley, feels in character.

Ye gods... that was alternately funny, sweet, and depressing. Very good! Perhaps what made it even more depressing was the mere fact that it took place in Wisconsin... br... I'm from Wisconsin... scary place. The sight of cows causes me to scream and cry like a little baby.
Anyway, good story. I liked it a lot.

Fav. Line: *I'm talking to cows. I need to get out of Wisconsin as soon as possible. It is not agreeing with me.*

Couldn't Crowley have just imagined himself in Wisconsin, destroyed the envelope and left? Destroying the envelope looked very simple...

What was in the closet? Michelle

Flat. Yes. That's Wisconsin in a nutshell. Possibly 'steak' as well.

Another nicely informative chapter. I liked the pondering of Crowley's decision to leave Heaven...never really thought about it.

Michelle

Fav. Line(favorite paragraph, really): "And Bartleby had given the line the middle finger and crossed over it the moment he made the decision to kill Loki."

Kind of short chapter, but very informative. I liked the part about flying, and I *really* liked the part about demonic moral standards. (And the memo.) Wonderful mix of seriousness and humor. Makes me torn between laughing and gaping at the screen. Michelle

Hour three? So Crowley's estimate was a bit off.

Favorite line: "Screw you all!" LOL.

Dogma...I've heard of the movie, but never knew what it was about. Sounds interesting though...I'll check it out.

Killed his best friend? That's low. But would Crowley have known the two?

As always, I love your wonderful sense of humor: you've captured the essence of Pratchett. Michelle

"They are being punished." LOL! That's my favorite line from this fic.

Very nice beginning-sucked me in anyway. :)

Michelle

Wow. You've done it again.

Brilliant fusion of Dogma and Good Omens. I love the little glimpses into Crowley's pre-fall memories and the way he explains how he doesn't remember heaven any more.

Yes, HE punishes with the worst of demons. *shudder*

- and I'm right with Crowley: Bartleby deserves whatever hell presents him with. Bloody traitor - for the second time.

This story was a lovely synthesis of Dogma and Good Omens storytelling. The whole scene with the closet was both twisted and very... right. Wow.

The mushiness on Crowley's part was a little overdone, but I like that. Psychologically, the way the whole betrayal of friendship thing on so many levels, all of the opposites and obvious comparisons stream through the plot seamlessly.

I liked the little detail about Bartleby betraying that conversation just before the war broke out. Seems almost telling that Crowley should saunter down casually just before/as the fighting begins, seeing as he also initiates mankind's fall on earth.

Er. Finish Here's To You! Please!