Reviews for The World That Have You In
Guest 7/2/12 . chapter 12
Lol! And the humor begins! More chapters please!
Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 12
Hawa-chan did u ever continued this story:-)
Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 8
Aaaw Shirogane is cooking for Akira and Akira sould repect that Shirogane loves him your doing good keep going
Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 7
Wow Akira-kun your mean but I love you inside:-) keep it up Hawa-chan I still belive in you your doing fantastice and I mean it:-)
Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 6
Oh Aya and Kengo are so glad to see Shirogane your doing wounderful keep it up;-)
Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 5
Oh look Kengo and Aya are coming good oh good im not really a Aya and Kengo fan im more of a Akira and Shirogane fan your still doing good actully more then good wounderful;-)
Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 4
Aaaw Shirogane wants to be right by Akira's side right now your doing good keep going Hawa-chan i have belife in you;-)
Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 3
Wow:-D that was sooo cute Hawa-chan keep it up your doing great you added more in to it good good keep going your doing wounderful;-)
Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 2
Aaaaah Shirogane missed Akira so bad hoow sweet your doing great Hawa-chan keep it up:-)
Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 1
That was a good chapter and Shirogane came back because he missed Akira so bad oh good job Hawa-chan:-)
kaminx 4/18/12 . chapter 12
O-ok... um WTF is right...O.O
Jamaican Skull 4/14/12 . chapter 12
You should really write more... Hope to see some more!
DevilishBea 7/14/11 . chapter 11
omg! what is happening! lol this is becoming really interesting!
Ludra-Jenova 5/29/11 . chapter 11
Hiya!

UPDATE! I WANT TO READ THE MPREG! *w* c'mon! also, why don't you do the chapters longer?

ANYWAY! UPDATE! *W*
Mutty 5/17/11 . chapter 11
It's fun but don't you think It's too short.

But thanks for writing it.
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