|Reviews for His Greatest Wish|
| excessivelyperky 5/20/13 . chapter 26
I like this Lily much better than canon! Lily. I do wish Lily would have disliked what she turned into in canon, but I suppose that was asking too much.
But things will be much better now that she understands the truth. (Plus, Severus being rich does help; Lily is more like her sister than she thinks she is, but she'll never, ever admit it).
Very good chapter where the truth is revealed.
| Griffin Raven 5/9/13 . chapter 36
Wow...absolutely brilliant how nasty old Tom Riddle AKA Voldemort was finally brought down especially the shear irony that it was both muggles & wizards that achieved this is totally wicked! Though I can only imagine the amount of mischief that either Fenrir Greyback or Dolores Umbridge might be able to cause within the wizarding but it will be interesting to see just what might happen next? Its great that Severus has finally been able to become
the wizard he should have always been without the influences/or presence of either his father Tobias Snape or having been sorted into Slytherin. So as Frank & Alice, Severus & Lily have gotten together, but what about the rest
of there group?
| Griffin Raven 5/9/13 . chapter 31
I really do think that all of Severus's friends could do with having there own second wands but I guess those would be hard to obtain without anyone finding out as they'd have to go to knockturn alley...whilst its very sad that Rose,
Petunia & Lily have lost there father/husband but at least they were able to get to safety from those nasty death
eaters because of the necklace given to Lily by Severus.
Utterely wicked story!
| excessivelyperky 5/8/13 . chapter 25
Neat chapter! But sometime or other Severus really needs to tell her the truth about both his history and how much he loves her.
| Griffin Raven 5/8/13 . chapter 15
Shame that there wasn't a way for Severus to have either pensieved or having his knowledge of what had happened in the future that he'd lived & died in before...but that would probably be very dangerous if he did so. Its
amazing just how much Severus life has changed since he returned to his childhood with his memories from when
he was Professor Snape head of Slytherin...since he was sorted into Gryffindor alongside Lily & has made six other
friends. But the most amazing is him becoming Severus Prince...and how will he be received by other students & if he'll be able to stay ahead or out of Albus Dumbledore's influence?
| Griffin Raven 5/6/13 . chapter 4
I've always thought it strange that the first years don't experience some kind of tiredness as they first begin to consciously focus there magic through there wands for the first time...though perhaps this isn't so? So far, Sev is
doing a bank-up job of changing things without actuallly intentional changing things...because most of the changes
seemed to have occurred so far because he was sorted into Gryffindor rather than into Slytherin.
| excessivelyperky 5/6/13 . chapter 24
Sev now realized why Dumbledore had waited until summer to try anything with the Horcruxes. If he lost control he didn't want the students to be in harm's way.
-Well, that's a nice change from canon. I am very glad that the four known Horcruxes are gone.
But Sev really needs to tell Lily!
I do like the irony where Lily snarks that she'd never chase after someone as atrocious as Vernon Dursley, though.
| excessivelyperky 4/27/13 . chapter 23
Oh, yes, the butterfly effect has a lot of far-reaching consequences. Now Tom may well make Horcruxes that nobody knows where they are, and won't those be fun to find?
But things are better; Hermione Granger will never be half-sliced up from Dolohov''s famous little curses. Bella will never drive her cousin Sirius into the Veil.
The war's not over yet.
| LoveSnilyAlways 4/24/13 . chapter 10
I thought Lilys birthday was on the 30th?
| LoveSnilyAlways 4/22/13 . chapter 1
Hey! Im re-reading your story just because i remember it was amazing and i forgot to hit the follow button. Um just curious tho?
A) does sev still think harry is mini-james?
B) i thought Dumbledore said the "fear in a name" thing? Then harry, then hermione?
| Mr 4/16/13 . chapter 1
I have noticed that you haven't been updating recently and I hope that school isn't too hard on you.
| excessivelyperky 4/17/13 . chapter 22
I loves my evil cliffies! Thank you for such a good one.
| excessivelyperky 4/7/13 . chapter 21
Poor Reggie, is he in trouble now.
| Elise 4/2/13 . chapter 36
Absolutely amazing, awesome, good, great, genius, intelligent, simply brilliant fanfiction story! I totally enjoyed reading it- love it- and hope you'll continue. :) The circle of seven was very well thought and the new beginning at Hogwarts is unique and original enough ;) and your writing style flowing and interesting. Good work.
| Eru no Tsubasa 2/22/13 . chapter 7
Haha cute! XD