nice

Awesome. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side.

I love the concept of this, but I think it could be even better if you make in more of a narrative form. Maybe start the fic with Zack saying goodbye to his friends and then as he comes in, a babysitter brings Cory to him and he takes her in his arms and then you can say the stuff about his secrets. Catch ya on the flip side.

Wonderful!

make some more about this story