Argh, so fantastic! It never occurred to me that Carrion must have played a larger part in the dream world. But now it's the only thing that makes sense-ergo, great storytelling.

Wow, I really liked this. It gives a really interesting take on how Carrion can be willing to kill Candy but still be fascinated with her-it's an original portrayal of what's going on in that head of his that doesn't seem outlandish. In just a chapter you've given us an inviting window into who Carrion is to you, and I'd like to explore it some more.

So keep posting!

Fabulous! I look forward to the next chapter :)

This sounds like it's going to be amazing - please update soon!

That was a very good fic. You stuck to Carrion's character perfectly

Can't wait to read more. :-)