It was awesome! But I think you need to update soon. I'm dying to see what's happening next! *gigles* Bye!

Yo! wassup!

i guess nothing much, but your quite good at this.

the part when they start the whole talk and fight

thing was, a little bit too fast.

also i'm really looking forward to your next chapter, i'm getting alittle tingle of excitment!

*i think i know what your up to but i just so badly like it when Gau turns evil then back to his normal or good self* *grin*

Greetings Politod, Squirtle, Octeleery...hehe...well, decent...but then it was fine. Fine...Too fast. Write more though, no one's reviewing it...*yawn*.

Whoa...slow down Squirtle :)! Well, this story's quite unique coz' u've got a different writing style...Uhmm...Blair Witch (again.?). You and Black Howling must be obsessed with Madame Evil (Blair Witch I mean...) Anywayz, the story and the plot is still good (though the reason for fighting is unclear...)