If the fluid from his water breaking didn't come from where the child would be birthed, where did it leak out from?

THis is really good!

This is great. You've managed to write a really emotional and touching story. Keep up the good work!

Very good Iliked this one but Robyn Sage is still my fave! please write a Moulin Rouge fic please (soz I'm obvsessed!)

Oh, that was sweet - the emotions that Qui-Gon felt were believable and his relationship with Mace was touching. But the ending made me sad, although I know that a child would not fit into the life Qui-Gon has chosen for himself. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reading it.