Wow!! I just loved this story. I came across it when I had the sudden urge to start reading stories about Toad. I just love Toad from X-Men: Evolution and X-Men the movie. Anyone who doesn't like toad is just plain crazy. Am I right. Anyway I loved your OC Ebony. She was awesome. I also loved the way you wrote Todd and Ebony's relationship. It was great. I loved your plot and everything. This was the best Todd OC story I have ever read. It's too bad you've never actually completed the sequal to this story. I so enjoyed reading this story and I'm sure I would've enjoyed the sequal as well. Well I've put you on Author alert just in case you ever do actually decide to finish the sequal. If you do I would be estactic to say the least since there's not that many great Todd OC stories like yours. :P

Good story!

I don't normally review the first chapters of stories that have many chapters...but reviews are nice so here I am.

Ebony seems like an interesting girl, and I especially like her attitude and how she and Todd seem to have hit it off. Very nicely done.

This is great! pleese hurry on this. Its too good to wait for.

This is probably the best fic I've ever read. You captered every characters personality very well. (I still have to try to restrain myself from lauphing whenever I think of Pietro. "You'll never take me alive coppers!" I usually fail.) And... here's a little secret. You're the reason I am now a huge fan of Toad, well you and the X-Men movie. Ray Parks is so AWESOME!
Actually, I had started reading this fic a long time ago (around when chapter 16 had come up I believe) and stopped (I can't remeber why but it wasn't because of you so don't worry) around when chap 24 went up. And suddenly after a couple of years I remember your fic and track it down. Not exactly easy since I could only remember Ebony's name and the fact that there had been alot of chapters but I was determined and found it. I reread the entire thing and fell in love with it all over again.
However my only complaint for this fic, and I suppose it is way to late to change it now, is that Ebony very rarely interacted with any of the other characters in your fic. It was nice how she liked Toad so much but I would have liked to see some real conversations with other people. Pietro and her relationship could have been very cool in my opinion among with some other people. Aside from that it was great.

P.S. I apoligise for not reviewing when I first saw your story. At the time my mother wouldn't allow it. I was to young at the time.
P.S.S. Being e-mailed back would be great if you have the time for it.

Welcome back, you were missed :D

Bunny,
If you don't write a sequel to Darwinian Rhapsody you will make this little, college house-elf uber sad! I adored your story. I also love Todd, Ebony, and the way you wrote all the characters. Please. Do us all a favor and WRITE MORE! Your really good at it. Maybe you should consider writing in your future. Email me, please, then I can know if I'll have to cry or rejoice over the sequel's status.
~*WinkyBells*~

i think kurt as a PI is just the funnyest thing I have ever read lol *sniggers*

as you so personally said it 'NUFF SAID!

Stop with the straw! It's making me want to smoke, which I apparently gave up [Thanks, dad!]. ^-^

LOL!! Kurt is so not Humphrey Bogart, in "The Maltese Falcon" or any other incarnation. However, it is most amusing that he thinks he is. Too precious. I'm still reading, but you should know, I support Lancitty much more than Kurtty. I may be very cross with you, if things don't go my way. ^-^

Kawaii can mean cute in a sense other than "baby turtle", but it's really informal. Damn Japanese class and its degrees of politeness! I wicked like all the anime references, especially the Sailor Scout uniform thing. Wicked kawaii! I will now continue reading; I just wanted to express my anime-related joy before I forgot.

Oh holy Quam! your BACK! You have no Idea how much I missed you! I was starting to give up hope for a sequil! YES yes please continue! YES YESYESYES YES! a tousand times YES! say it with me here Ye-es! T-T oh please dont torture me!

Arashiro Pe






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Great story, ijust finished reading it and i hope you get more up soon