|Reviews for EO Challenge: Cause and Effect|
| Edina Clouds 12/17/10 . chapter 1
"Dean hissed in pain as Sam pressed a damp towel against his bloody bicep"
I love a bit of bloody bicep - especially if it's Deans
nice job sweetie
| Amberdreams 12/16/10 . chapter 1
Ouch Dean - messing with a Rottweiler, especially one trained by a wily hunter like Bobby - some biys never learn, you are right there!
Loved the graphic description in your second sentence, very powerfully setting the scene and the pain is palpable.
| BarbaraGER 12/15/10 . chapter 1
Yes, Sam. That's where you're perfectly right.
Nice one, my friend!
| Nana56 12/14/10 . chapter 1
Hahahaha! Of course he should have known better than that! Not a good idea with any dog...but Rumsfeld? No way!
Very, very cute. :)
| nwspaprtaxis 12/14/10 . chapter 1
I love the way this is set up - with Dean hurt and bleeding and Sam tending to him (I kind of imagine them in the same setup/scene-block as S3's JUS IN BELLO) and Dean on the brink of passing out and in quite a bit of pain and then the twist of the injury having resulted from taking the ball from Bobby's dog. Although in my head, it's totally because Dean wanted to play fetch with the dog.
| MeAzrael 12/14/10 . chapter 1
Hahahaaaa :-) Jeez, poor Dean, I shouldn't laugh (bad girl), but your punch line was perfect – the picture it creates in my mind, and Dean's face when Rumsfeld (LOL, just the name of that wonderful dog, priceless) bit him :-)) Sam was more than gracious with his brother here, that screams for some bitchy remarks (only 100 words, I know, too bad ;-)
Well done, honey!
P.S. And yeah, I think we should've earned some warm and cosy Winchester at our side when the winter is so chilly...
| DeansBabyBird 12/13/10 . chapter 1
Haha, you got me there! Oh and I love the word cadence - such a lyrical word!
| moira4eku 12/12/10 . chapter 1
LOL! I had to read the last line twice because it caught me by surprised! Thanks for the laugh.
| Swellison 12/12/10 . chapter 1
I love the summary on this one;-) I like Sam doctoring Dean up and lecturing him at the same time;-)
| LaedieDuske 12/12/10 . chapter 1
LOL So I read the description and was instantly saying, "Deeeeean!" Don't toy with the damn Rottie!
Nice work. :-)
*rubs Dean's tummy*
| Mad Server 12/12/10 . chapter 1
Haha! Totally didn't see that coming. :)