The story was great can you please do another Yuki and Hatori story please :-)

*wipes blood off* Why in all mighty yaoi gods is there not more of this pairing *pouts* Hatori and Yuki are perfect *squeals*

I know I'm a little late to comment on this story, but I just read the entire thing and it's really good. :)

Not to mention, the thought of poor Tohru cupping a seahorse-Hatori in her hands makes me squeal. Let me hold him, Tohru!

This is so cute! I love this! *huggles you*

I don't know WHY I rarely see any Hatori/Yuki; I always thought they'd go good together. They're very calm and stoic people, are they not?

GREAT!

PERFECT!

thanks for writing :)

Great ending!

Sooo...I went ahead and read what I had missed. Holy Crap. This is a good story. You went a completely different direction than I orignially thought you'd go. I'm so proud of you! What are you going to do next? I'm thinking of another FB pairing. I might just have to steal Hatori from you. Hmmm...:) Anyways, I just wanted to leave you a note. I came. I read. I was very impressed!

NONONONONONONOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! there has to be more! like a sequal about kyou and haru or something? please write more! is killing me!

i want to personify this story ad make babies with it please write more!

update soon. its really good. u should put up more hatori and yuki combination they sadly dont have that many up here. any way keep up the good work

this chapter was really good . i think im spelling his name wrong sry if im but i think it would have been a hotter scene if ristu joined in with yuki and hatori just my thought other wise keep up the work its really good

yes the screwing IS always good :) good job, i think that ritsu should 'accidentally' slip up secretly having a thing for ayame. (seeing as, Ritsu is always saying he wants to be like aya.)

Oooh, exhibitionism! Kinky. I like it!

I hope you keep going with this, since I enjoy it so much. But if you're really not feeling it anymore you can always finish it while using an open ending that will enable you to continue at another time with a follow-up story. But if you do continue, as I hope, you have stuff to work with. Following Aktio's death, Yuki and Hatori have a lot more freedom, so maybe they will use that freedom for something special? Whatever you decide, I have loved reading this story!

I think (and hope) that you keep going with this! It could be interesting to catch the ups and downs of their living together, considering the age difference. After all, Hatori is older and still Yuki's doctor. Yuki is bound to be defiant and rebellious at times. Hatori may even go to Shigure and Aya for advice on how to deal with the temperamental teen.