Good story.

Wow... Too cool. I really liked this one, especially the ending. I hope you won't mind me using it as a quote to open up one of my stories...? I won't actually use it *in* the story, just as the beginning of the story/chapter. Again... wow... That was beautiful... though, constructive critism, the ending was kinda confusing (even if it was great) becuase you used "I'm" where you should have used "I am". Thank you for the wonderful story...

Hmmmm, interesting! And slashy - yay. Oh, and I really like the title...

This is a very good shortpiece. I really enjoyed it although it was kind of dark. Very convincing and romantic too.

Keep up the good work.