|Reviews for Jiraiya's Mistake|
| Roxas Uzumaki-284 10/5/12 . chapter 1
Oh jiraiya you are so a dead man by tsunade it was funny
| Kera-Chan 8/4/12 . chapter 1
There 13 and had sex!? SICK! WTF?!
| M-LukaxxLiexxNaruHina 6/15/12 . chapter 1
o my gawd. i couldn't stop laughing. so fawny. oh jiraiya...
| 9foxgrl 1/15/11 . chapter 1
This is totally an LOL moment!
Please add more!
| animerc 1/9/11 . chapter 1
more please more
| hiNAru Aburame 12/23/10 . chapter 1
And... Wow?... jeje, great.
Greetings and till the next fic. n_n
| Towards the sun 12/14/10 . chapter 1
I love it, but i'm really curious about the actual content of that book. I mean, the only clue you left is the word 'waterfall'. On the side note, its a little disturbing that they both just thirteen and doing that.
| Chewie Cookies 12/13/10 . chapter 1
Oh, he's dead... or at least his man parts are, lolz.
Awesome oneshot! Melikey!
| Lander Blazer 12/13/10 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHA! Man that was a funny one, poor Naruto and Hinata... Having the whole 'scene' revealed to the entire world's pervert population, I wonder what is gonna to happen to Jiraya?