Love this one! Love all of them actually. :) I like how you made Scorpius have an internal conflict!

This was great! :-) You are amazing at freeverses. My favorites were the last one & Going, Going, Gone. Again, wonderful job!

seaweedbrain213

This is amazing. Absolutely stunning. I love the way you've portrayed every character. Beautiful.

I loved this story! I especially loved the one with Lucy and narnia, so true. And of course Lily and Scorpius. But my favourite would have to be this one, Happily Ever After. It was perfect and sums them up so well. Loved it.

I think this was really lovely. I like the way you portray them, it's like a dreamy, fairy quality to the words. kind of like how I imagine Luna would think. it's beautiful.

happy writing

-Cyra3

I've just read all 20 chapters and am shocked at how good you are at freeverse- it's becoming one of my favorite forms or writing to read! These were so beautifully written and a lot of them were so sweet and passionate! I loved it!

All of these were really great, I liked them a lot :) it's nice that you didn't just stick to your otps (whatever they may be) but paired certain people up differently — I know I find that really hard! Well done, keep writing!

Wow, this was really powerful and good and... yeah.

I liked how you put them into pairs, and seeing James and Louis having red hair was different than usual.

So, good job. :)

Awesome...

Pearl, I loved this chapter!

The way you talked about each kid and the way you paired (or tripled) them off.

Also, you said Louis had red hair. I don't see that a lot, so I liked that. :)

My favourite lines have got to be;

"because it's th that matters –

and who you choose to take it with"

They are so true Pearl and I love how you can put so much emotion into one Freeverse. Your style is fabulous.

Great Job Pearl.

I'm a little over halfway with your freeverses and they're just beautiful. I love the way they're written and I don't really know what to say. They're just awesome and I love all the personalities of the people.

SO MUCH ANGST! SO MUCH FREEVERSE! SO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS FIC! :D

I'm really impressed by the way you captured Rose. I will never view her any other way again (:

Hi! Here's the review! Sorry i didn't do it before ;) Great story, but i loved first three, though. Loved the way you got into rose and lily's head. Rose the sexy goddess and Lily the innocent angel. But i prefer Scorpius/Rose than Scor/Lily, i think they're sexier together. Nevertheless, excellent story ;)

I cant write free verses, but i love to read them, and these r just amazing :) i dont know how you do it, but however u do it, just keep on doing it!

YOU ARE AN AMAAZZINNGG POET :DDD I'm going to check out your other stories, now.