| Reviews for Road Trip |
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Sabaku no Sable 2/25/13 . chapter 1The only thing i kept thinking about was the two twins Luna has which makes me wonder if they are Harry's children. XD |
bobbo 2/18/13 . chapter 1 eh, the luna thing at the end was out of left field. i can't see her being like that. the hermione plot was also dropped by the wayside in a rowlingish way. if 100% is a professional story, i came in expecting 70% and got 50%. this review does not merit capitalization. meh i suppose it could be much much worse... |
Guest 2/10/13 . chapter 1 Brilliant and surprising at the same time, as always. Thanks for this. I don't know how you could follow this up with a sequel, but I would be interested to see it. Two items: First, your use of possessives and apostrophes needs work (it's means 'it is', not 'belonging to it'). Second, your astronomy needs work - prior to full moon, the moon rises before sunset, not after. Somehow I missed this in your listing originally, but found it at Hurin3's community. |
serenityselena 1/24/13 . chapter 1interesting story :) |
josephbendov 12/24/12 . chapter 1I think this was a really good portrayal of what their lives would actually be like after a war. Most fics I see don't really cover the psychological aspect of it at all. Also, I love that you based a character of of anyone from QC. I've been reading that comic since I was a teenager. Great story. |
pinks99 10/14/12 . chapter 1I don't usually like more romance-oriented fan-fics, but I really enjoyed this story. Lavender's character was particularly well depicted. |
Jimbocous 9/20/12 . chapter 1Nicely done! |
noylj 8/4/12 . chapter 1Is that the end of the story? |
Super-Saiyan-3-Vegeta 5/7/12 . chapter 1this was a truly amazing story. I loved it |
jonski 4/21/12 . chapter 1I love it. Do more fics like this pls... |
Scabbers1957 3/20/12 . chapter 1This was a very original, well thought out story. Very well done. I'll add this to my favs. :)) |
Arpad Hrunta 3/6/12 . chapter 1Fun story! Really damn enjoyable. I like how Harry was able to bring some light into the lives of me three favourite female Harry Potter characters. |
Guest 1/7/12 . chapter 1 Tee-hee. ROFL at your A/N. |
madbrad 12/17/11 . chapter 1You're an evil author. I sometimes whinge about there not being enough H/Hr in your stories, so here you *almost* bring it about, just barely, right on the brink, literally, only to have it dissolve. Well, it still ends with that solid H/Hr friendship going strong, and that's just as good. Well, almost. :-) No, I did like like the ending with these two best friends. I enjoyed your interpretation of Lavender. I remember being alarmed at the cliff-hanger you left us with in the serialisation of this on your Yahoo group ... I was worried that Harry had become a werewolf. Reading alchymie's review of this story has me thinking of a sequel (please please please?). You do have some threads you could resume with this one. Hermione's healing. Did she help Harry in his philanthropy? What about alchymie's notion of Harry and Hermione finally getting together, when they're both ready? Would Luna, after a few years with Rolf, start to yearn for some more sex? And how would Hermione handle that? As always, thank you for you HP fan fiction industry! |
nobodez 12/9/11 . chapter 1I really ought not to delve your archives that often. Or maybe more often, so I don't waste hours of my morning (and early afternoon) reading your wonderful prose. Oh, and great story. You captured all the elements you noted at the end, and yes, I can totally see Hannilore in Luna (I may steal a bit of that characterization for my stories). |