Woah. That was... breathtaking. Chills again. I'm not sure how exactly to describe my endless praise for this story. I love your foreshadowing; you do it so well. I could only wish there were more authors like you around.

Heavens, Meredith, you're twisted.

It's awesome! :)

Okay, I've read that story a couple of times and it took me a while to get a feel for it. But I love it now. Very convincing portrayal of Anakin. Haunting.

The very first story I ever read by you(which hooked me instantly, of course) and I never reviewed it! The horror! I loved the imagery and the symbolism. The one thing that I really enjoy about your shorter fics is how the resolution is no resolution at all. You imply a sense of doom either in the reader's foreknowledge of how the story goes or by simple word-play that hints to the same thing. It's better when you don't tell your reader's everything; it lets them fill in some of the pieces on their own.

But just so I don't sound like a Meredith groupy I suppose I better throw in a critisism. Hmmm, lets see...*scratches head* Formatting, perhaps? Just a personal preference I suppose, I like having the words wrap to fit the screen. But then again you do that for your newer fics so just ignore me.

Woah, dude! That is sooo freaky. Why does everyone pick on my Ani? Not that your stories are bad. I rather like them.

Nadra

Oh, that was beautiful. So sad, it seemed to capture everything. Very beautiful

So in Ani's vision, he saw his Ami pregnant and unknown to him, the 2 youths were his and Ami's twin offspring and then he saw himself as Darth Vader! Wonder if he knows this is a vision of his future?

Wow - that was really great. Poor Anakin.