And here I thought that Demando had known Usagi generally as Serenity (did he ever spent time with Usa? Wasn't it always Serenity or Sailor Moon? Maybe when he captured her, but for HIM she was Serenity then.)

THAT WAS *()%$$# AWESOME! I knew it would turn out to be Sailor Cosmos! Poor Demando *huggles* my god...that was just breathtaking AWESOME! VERY GOOD!

Lovely. Absolutely lovely (Even for an Usa/Mamo-shipper) Sailor Cosmos is one of my favorite characters and I think the end of the anime series loses a lot by redefining Chibi-chibi. You really captured Cosmos' journey, both pain and joy. Incredible style and even more incredible for keeping it canon. Kudos.

whoa, great ending. Excellent build up. really makes you think about how "perfect" Usagi and Mamoru are together.

despite how, er, archaic this phrase is, i have say it:

dude, that's just mean.

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anyways, despite my firm usamamo status, i have to concede that you wrote a great fic. what else is new?

That other person, you shouldn't listen to her, cause my english teacher was just telling me that i should write more thoughts, and diolouge and not so much SHOW then TELL. I think this is VERY good! Ne ways, and you should tell who ever thinks you needed more spacing on surrender to rain, is crazy, because when people write, it's suppose to be long and in PARAGRAPH form, just like you did. So keep up the good work!

thanx for spacing. but...u need to make ur chappie's longer! puh-leeze. I know u have the ability to do so. later

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