I love Demando-sama! . He is so gosh darn pretty. Ahem, another great fic! Of course, all your Demando fics are wonderful.

wonderful, just like all your other fics. i loved it, it's so angsty. poor demando, he's almost always on the losing side. your fics are always a refreshing release from the demando-hatred of other writers. _

ja,

watercolor tears

That was interesting, i have thought that maybe demando had know Usagi, but not in any other way then the way that fatal exposure had to offer. I thought maybe at one point he knew Princess Serenity, along with of course Neo-Queen Serenity, but never had i 'really' thought that he played apart in Usagi's life after she became Chiba Usagi. OF course Demando would fall in love with the free-spirited girl, many had. But, in the manga, and i'm sure in the anime, Demando had fallen in love with Neo-Queen Serenity for the reasons: 1. He was infatuated with her looks. 2. Her kindness, 3. Her soulful eye, 4. The ability to be such a regal and forgiving Queen, 5. For not being such a free-spirited, but stubborn. I think this story is really good, i would say it needs slight improvement, but that would be a lie. I'm going to go now because this is really long. Ja!

first off, u need to space more often. "SHOW don't TELL me" what u r doing. other than that, it was ok. hope to read more soon.

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