I like the way you've written thoughts down in simple abstract terms..

Oh I love this. I don't know where I got the idea that Alice and Edward are amazing but I love to read fanfics about them.

There is even a wish of me to read a story about Alice having a vision where she's kissing a man and suddenly she sees that it's Edward and not Jasper. This all happens while Edward is dating Bella. And even if Alice is trying to do everything to change the future she only gets more visions of them together. And the perfect thing is that Edward is a mind reader and discouvers her vision at some point. Sadly I havent found a fanfic like that.

Love It.

Beautiful.

All I can say is wow. I do hope youll write more

I loved it!

Alice and Edward R a great couple!

Kisses.

Hey, loved the story, this is one of my favorite pairings, they're mental abilities are way to connected, makes them an intriguing pair, keep it coming.